tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3970359442859466607.post2888000083194754705..comments2023-10-15T08:49:52.956-03:00Comments on Blackprint Poetry: On a night outAnonymoushttp://www.blogger.com/profile/02223320225574574971noreply@blogger.comBlogger7125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3970359442859466607.post-89991334643920270942012-08-08T00:35:23.348-03:002012-08-08T00:35:23.348-03:00This poem reminds me of a great night and then goi...This poem reminds me of a great night and then going out for tacos at 3am, stumbling back to the apartment. There were no worries and in those moments we had no jobs to do and no people think about but ourselves. Thanks for bringing up so many good memories.Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12690736229007651539noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3970359442859466607.post-80448191451757849912011-02-23T19:28:39.013-03:002011-02-23T19:28:39.013-03:00Nicely done Sean Paul. Many know the experience.Nicely done Sean Paul. Many know the experience.emmett wheatfallhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07466994239329611740noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3970359442859466607.post-68002039345287047852011-02-21T22:50:49.626-03:002011-02-21T22:50:49.626-03:00LOVE IT! How vivid and alive! Oh my God... you ar...LOVE IT! How vivid and alive! Oh my God... you are amazing!<br /><br />Thank you for sharing!<br /><br />Sincerely,<br /><br />Skylar Smythe<br />The Guerilla Poetess (c) 2009<br />Toronto, CanadaSkylar Smythe https://www.blogger.com/profile/06218136443422844497noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3970359442859466607.post-41330747357568911822011-02-21T03:59:19.498-03:002011-02-21T03:59:19.498-03:00Pretty sweet. Love the imagery. The word flow make...Pretty sweet. Love the imagery. The word flow makes it seem like it's being said as the transformation is happening. Well done, sir! You are definitely one to follow.R.M. Heplerhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11468258565269192981noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3970359442859466607.post-13312835593365226602011-02-20T12:14:10.347-03:002011-02-20T12:14:10.347-03:00Great poem! Something about some of the choices fo...Great poem! Something about some of the choices for line breaks seemed to be a bit off in places to me though. For example, 'Just laugh, relax, the night/ is young...' - the choice of breaking the phrase 'the night is young' suggests a particular emphasis on the final two words, yet this feels almost coincidental as the end of the sentence is where the emphasis really lies. The phrase 'seems/to hold too much' is quite brilliant though! <br /><br />You should submit something to Word-in-the-Eye.com. :)Jonathanhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/02217196172536934424noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3970359442859466607.post-49960458350748407812011-02-20T11:02:18.493-03:002011-02-20T11:02:18.493-03:00Nice wordsNice wordsMusiqal1https://www.blogger.com/profile/02047576223104983718noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3970359442859466607.post-44117658259709409922011-02-19T20:40:56.859-03:002011-02-19T20:40:56.859-03:00This is dopeThis is dopeacebiggavelihttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11580978518746607872noreply@blogger.com